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This is a story that goes back to the beginnings of mankind, a time when nothing existed.
Nothing, except three young goldfinches who waited anxiously for the moment to spread their wings and discover themselves.
This is the tale of how fate brought them together and incredibly changed each one of their lives.
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A soft breeze fluttered the red leaves of the âTree of Scienceâ, one of two special trees created by God in the Garden of Eden â a place located in the center of the world.
Beneath the titanic tree, around one hundred fifteen meters, 12-year-old Adam took a nap leaning against its trunk, surrounded by a far-flung, outstanding landscape. A beautiful garden. At his side Eve picked some amaranths that grew in the area.
âWatch out, Adam!â
The girl instantly perceived an evil intent in the bushes. The predator swooped the prey, trying to end the victimâs life with just a poisonous bite of its teeth.
âI caught you, talking snake!â
âSsss, always depending on others!â
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The snake escaped and slid down Adamâs arm until landing on the ground.
âEh, Iâm ready. Come at me!â
Adam put his right foot on the soil. Eve watched, worried. The snake turned its back.
âWhatâs up? Are you running away...? What a coward, huh!â
The Talking Serpent stuck its tongue out.
âHm, donât let your guard down, because when you least expect it, Iâll be there to take your idiotic life⦠you fool!â
âW-WHAT?! Ok, now you have done it!â
Adam roared out as Eve took hold of his arms.
âCOME BACK HERE! Time for our second round!â
âCalm down, she already left.â
Eve sighed, lifted her head and looked into the distance. No further signs of the snake.
âWeâve been like this for the past five days... I wonder what sheâs up to. It couldnât beâ¦?â
â¦
Since then, the Talking Serpent never ceased to appear before them, daily aiming for Adamâs life, and thus five more days passed.
Neither prey or predator gave in, and the time to decide which one will be standing at the end would come.
â¦
The 10th day.
âEh, youâre so annoying.â
Adam smiled. Blood gushed from his lower lips, the face full of scars, which showed how fierce the quarrels between were.
ââ¦Ridiculous!â
âWhat?!â
âLet's sort things out. Tomorrow afternoon, our last quarrel.â
The statement astonished both kids. Adam wasnât hoping this challenge so soon.
«No, perhaps this is the right time.»
âAlright. Letâs end this.â
Shortly after, Eva approached Adam, somehow bothered.
âWhatâs wrong, Eve?â
Adam's expression was quite normal bearing in mind that the boy had just accepted a battle to the death.
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âI know... the real reason why sheâs doing all this.â
The kid smirked, not taking her seriously.
âWhat are you saying, Eve...? Sheâs just a goddamnâ¦â
âThink for a sec! What she really wants isnât to argue with you and spur fights. Probably does that because she doesnât know another way. Yes... all this time, she tried to get close to us; tried to get close to you!â
This last revelation shocked Adam, who felt his body tremble hearing Eveâs words.
âI can understand. I was lucky to meet you, Adam, but if I hadnât met you, Iâd probably feel that way too... lonely. I mean, at the end of the day⦠weâre completely alone... in this world!â
Eve was unable to contain the emotions coming up. Adam was stunned. During this whole time, he never realized. Though it was so obvious⦠Eveâs feelings touched the boyâs heart. No more mistakes from now on.
âThanks, Eve. Iâll definitely âend thisâ. Itâs a promise!â
â¦
The sun beat down, the mild weather of the afternoon. Adam and Eve were the first to arrive. Adam kept the strong-willed look of yesterday.
A few minutes later, a third person popped up. However, to the childrenâs surprise, it wasnât the Talking Serpent. A boy about their age, slightly taller than Adam.
âHum... are you lost...?â Adam asked.
Eva was certain itâs not the first time they see each other.
«Yes... those eyes...!»
âAre you...?â
âThis is my human form â my true form. Got any problem with that?â
âA BOY?!â Adam was gobsmacked.
âThatâs why youâre surprised?!â Eve yelled at her friend.
âCâmon⦠letâs end thisâ the Talking Serpent said.
âYeahâ Adam nodded firmly.
The Talking Serpent advanced to the âTree of Scienceâ, stood his feet steadily on the ground and took a huge leap upwards. He rose at an unbelievable speed in a few seconds.
âAmazing... what a jump...!â Eve thought.
Adam merely followed him. The two reached the top of the tree.
âBefore anything else, I need to ask. Why me?â
The lad bit his lips slightly.
âCuzâ of your annoying behavior. Youâre... too resigned. And I cannot stand that!â
The Talking Serpent filled Adam with a wide variety of blows. Adam could at first withstand his attacks. Nevertheless, thereâs a certain difference in skill, therefore becoming an unequal fight. Heâs way stronger than beforeâ¦
âEven though you donât know who you really areâ¦â
A punch in Adamâs face.
âEven though you donât know where you really areâ¦â
A second punch in the face.
âEven though you donât know why you exist in the first placeâ¦â
A punch in the gut.
âEven though you know NOTHINGâ¦!â
Another knee in the abdomenâ¦
The desperate snake gave up on holding back its emotions⦠A short break. The Talking Serpent panted, Adam had some blood. Adam was willing to physically receive all the anger, sadness, pain and envy.
«Envy?»
Yes, the snakeâs envy of that naive child, always cheerful despite the circumstances.
âEven so... even so... HOW...? How can you live it so carelessly? This life without purpose or reason?!â
The Talking Serpent attacked Adam once again. Either the snakeâs moves were getting worse or Adam was slowly getting better. Adam dodged. Something had started to change. However, in such an unreliable space where the only way to get around was to move from branch to branch, a misstep could mean their demiseâ¦
A slip-up. After successfully dodging the snake's blow, Adam didnât notice a gap and eventually misled the Talking Serpent into an error of judgement. An one hundred fifteen meters fall awaited them now.
The air masses compressed, leading to an increase in the atmospheric pressure. As they fell towards the ground, breathing got harder.
80 meters.
The exchange of successive blows continuedâ¦
60 meters.
The Talking Serpent began to lose control of the duelâ¦
50 meters.
In order to get back the tide of the fight, the snake caught Adam unaware with constriction â a method that some snakes use to kill their prey. Adam tried to get out at all costs.
âI might not know who I am... I might not know where I am... I might not know why I exist... That said, I believe that a purpose to live isnât something given... You must seek it with your own strength... while you live your life to the fullest!â
The Talking Serpentâs heart shuddered hearing his wordsâ¦
40 meters.
âThatâs just... FOOLISH TALK!â
âWRONG!â
30 meters.
âLook around you! This bright sun...â
The sun setting in the distance, the red and orange hue reverberating in their eyes.
âThis huge sea...â
The clean waters suffered the lightâs refraction.
âAll this world...â
The sun, the sea and the vegetation formed the most beautiful view.
âI was blessed⦠with this life! Thatâs why I made an oath to myself. I swore to make the most of every day like it was the last and find my own purpose in the meantime⦠so I wonât regret later!â
20 meters.
At that moment, the snake felt deeply pierced by the power of his wordsâ¦
âEnd this...â
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âYeah, Iâll end... THIS LONELINESS INSIDE YOU!â
The emptiness in his chest had been briefly filled by the positive energy⦠The cross Adam carried around his neck responded to the feelings of its owner. A mystic aura surrounded him, the white eyes.
Thatâs when the Talking Serpent realized the power Adam had and which he lacked⦠The power... to believe.
Perhaps the work of fate or just a coincidence that played an important role, the lower branches of the tree delayed the fall and diminished its impact, saving their lives. Eve ran towards them.
âEverything okay?â she asked the green-eyed boy first.
He denied the gaze, wrecked insideâ¦
âHey... whatâs your name?â
âI donât have oneâ¦â
âThen I may have the perfect name for you.â
âEh...?â
The lad rolled his eyes and finally stared at her.
âNachash.â
ââNachashâ...?â
ââThe brightâ.â
Nachash blushed. Meanwhile, Adam cleaned the trousers and held out his hand.
âI won. Just come with us, you idiot!â
Nachash complied, letting himself be lifted. The Talking Serpent couldnât resist the happiness and displayed a dashing smile.
ââNachashâ...â he repeated to himself.
Mysterious tears poured from his eyes, but the young quickly shook them off.
The goldfinch flapped its wings, flying to where it belongs. And so Nachash set off... with his new friends.
Their tale isnât overâ¦
[End of the First Part]