Suggestion?

Recently, I deleted some parts. I feel like my one-shots are kinda boring um. I mean, yeah, I will improve, but I want some suggestions; what do you think? What should I do to improve my writing style I means I have lot of things in my mind to write but the problem is I can't express my words or feelings in a good manner, I think so.

Have any ideas or suggestions? That help me to improve,  what I can do or add in my stroies

That can improve my writing skills? Be honest right

One more question

Should I write in English or Hindi???

Thank you🌸✨

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