Chapter 17 of 27

Monster Kid and the Incredibles vs. Syndrome

The Incredibles: The Dawn of Monster Kid1,579 words~8 min read

(At the Stewart Mansion, Max starts duplicating into 12 clones and cleaning the kitchen. Afterwards, the kitchen is finished and Max reabsorbs the duplicates)

Max: Now that the kitchen is finished, I can make that pizza.

(Moments later, someone rang the doorbell and Megan rushes to the door)

Megan: I'll get it.

(Megan opens the door and see Syndrome)

Megan: Uh, hello? Can I help you?

Syndrome: Are you Max Stewart aka Monster Kid?

(Max approaches the front door alongside Harold and Cora)

Max: Yes.

Harold: And who are you?

Syndrome: Just a friendly neighbor.............

(Syndrome kicks Harold in the chest, knocking him to the floor)

Megan, Max and Cora: Dad!

(Syndrome grabs Max by the arm)

Syndrome: I'm taking your son, bye!

(Syndrome teleports to Xerek's lair, bringing Max with him)

Harold: Max!

Cora: No!

(Meanwhile at the arena in Xerek's lair, Syndrome teleports into the center while dropping Max onto the floor)

Max: Ow!

(Max gets back up to confront Syndrome)

Max: Alright buddy, why did you bring me here?

(Max takes one look at Syndrome)

Max: Wait a minute, you're Syndrome! The archenemy of the Incredibles. I thought you were dead.

Syndrome: I'm a clone kid, get use to it.

Max: Okay, so why did you bring me here anyway?

Syndrome: Because he told me too.

Max: Who?

Xerek: (offscreen) Me.

(Max see Xerek on a holographic screen)

Max: Xerek?

Xerek: How nice of you to come Max Stewart or as you like to be called, Monster Kid.

Max: Why did you sent the clone of a supervillain who killed many superheroes, after me? What do you want from me?

Xerek: What I want is your DNA. I planned on creating an army of monsters and take over the world.

Max: What makes you think I'll give you my DNA?

(Xerek pressed another button, causing a section of the floor to open, bringing the Incredibles into the arena)

Max: What the? The Incredibles?!

(Xerek is holding a taser and points it at Jack-Jack)

Mr Incredible and Elastigirl: No!

Dash: Leave Jack-Jack alone.

Xerek: Give me your DNA or else I'll electrocute the Incredibles to death. Better yet, I could launch some missiles at your house, killing your family.

(Max glares at Xerek)

Elastigirl: Max, don't do it! Don't

(Max sighs as he has no choice)

Max: Fine, you win.

Xerek: Glad to see you agree to my terms.

(Xerek pressed a button, causing a large glass dome to slams down, imprisoning Max, much to his surprise. The glass dome is fitted with electrodes and has a large hose attached to the top. Eventually, the area in the glass dome starts to emit a green light and the equipment crackles as the machine start siphoning his energy. Max tries to break the glass, but collapse onto the floor as he's being drained of his energy. A large tank starts to fill with Max's energy in the form of green particles)

Max: (groans) No.

Elastigirl: No!

(Violet uses her force field powers to escape and went to the control console, pressed a button which frees her family)

Elastigirl: (grabs Jack-Jack) Let's go save Max.

(As the Incredibles went to rescue Max, Xerek and Syndrome block their path)

Xerek: Don't even think about it Supers!

(Syndrome traps the Incredibles in a zero-point energy field)

Xerek: You're too late.

(Max groans, feeling weak when he notice the device is overloading)

Max: Hey Xerek, this thing is about to explode.

Xerek: What?

(Xerek rushes to the machine, which is overloading)

Xerek: No, it can't be?

Syndrome: What is it?

Xerek: Monster Kid's energy is too much for the machine to absorb.

Syndrome: What?!

(Max morphs his hands into hooks and hits the glass, creating a hole and leaves, but still feels a little weak)

Max: (panting) Did you really think draining my energy was easy?

(The tank starts to crack, setting off the alarm)

Xerek: It's going to explode!

Syndrome: Oh no.

(Xerek puts on a jet pack and flies out of the lair)

Syndrome: Hey! You traitor!

(As the tank cracks a little more, Syndrome releases the Incredibles from his zero-point energy trap and creates a force field to protect himself)

Violet: Uh oh.

Dash: It's going boom!

Elastigirl: I'll just grab Max and.............

(It was too late as the tank explodes as Violet was going to create a force field, but Max quickly morphs his arms into pincer claws and absorbs the energy that was drained from him. Afterwards, Max falls on his knees, grunting as he starts glowing)

Dash: What's wrong with him?

Elastigirl: Is he turning into a new monster?

Violet: He absorbed the energy that was drained from him. Max needs time to recover from it.

Mr. Incredible: Let's get out of here before

(Suddenly, Mr. Incredible gets sucker punched by Syndrome, sending him crashing against the wall)

Mr. Incredible: Ow!

Syndrome: Ha! I punched Mr. Incredi........

(Dash uses super speed to punch Syndrome a couple of time, only to get grabbed by the arm)

Dash: Uh oh.

Syndrome: Think you though huh?

(Syndrome attempts to punch Dash, but Jack-Jack bites Syndrome in the arm, causing the supervillain to scream in pain, forcing him to release Dash as Mr. Incredible and Elastigirl charge at him)

Mr. Incredible: Hey Syndrome! Take this!

(Mr. Incredible and Elastigirl punch Syndrome in the face, sending him to the floor. Syndrome gets back up and turns himself invisible)

Dash: Hey, where did he..........

(Suddenly, Jack-Jack gets snatches from Violet's hands as Syndrome makes himself visible)

Syndrome:  Surprise!

Violet: Jack-Jack!

(Syndrome laughs as Jack-Jack struggles against his grip)

Syndrome: One more step and I'll throw him all the way into space.

Elastigirl: No!

(Max saw Syndrome holding Jack-Jack, which makes him angry. Sooner or later, he gets touched by the sun's rays)

Mr. Incredible: If you hurt him, I'll.............

Syndrome: You'll throw a car at me? Whatever. As long as I have your son, I'm untouchable! I'm holding all the cards!

(Eventually, Max stops glowing and charges at Syndrome with super speed, takes Jack-Jack out from his hands and hands him to Elastigirl)

Max: I believe this baby is yours.

(Syndrome glares at Max and charges at him)

Syndrome: You little twerp!

(Syndrome tackles Max to the floor)

Syndrome: (raises his fist in the air) I'm going to punch you so hard that your head gets flatten to the floor. Any last words?

Max: Yeah, going kaiju!

Syndrome: (raised an eyebrow) Going kaiju.

(Max kicks Syndrome off of him and transforms into Solaris)

(Solaris roars at Syndrome, who is shocked)

Syndrome: What the?!

(Solaris slowly approaches Syndrome)

Syndrome: So what, I can still take you down!

(Syndrome flies towards Solaris and starts punching him, but Solaris was still standing and looks annoyed. Eventually, Solaris smacks Syndrome with his pincer claw, sending the supervillain crashing to the floor, leaving a rut)

Syndrome: Ow!

(Solaris swings his tail and hits Solaris, sending him to the wall, leaving a huge hole)

Dash: Nice!

(Syndrome gets back up and charges at Solaris, only to get trapped in Violet's invisible dome)

Syndrome: Foolish girl. I have your powers too.

(Syndrome cancels the force field and charges at Violet, only to get grabbed by the cape by Solaris, who glares at him, then throws the supervillain into the pod, which automatically locks itself)

Syndrome: Hey, what's going on?

(Dash runs over to the pod, see a power with a label that says "Reverse powers" on it)

Dash: Would you look at that.

(Dash pressed the button, which a light to shine onto Syndrome as needles are injecting some serum into his body, causing him to grunt in agony. Afterwards, the pod stops and Syndrome gets out, panting as he glares at the Incredibles and runs towards Mr. Incredible to delivery a punch. Syndrome eventually punches Mr. Incredible in the face, only to hurt his hand)

Syndrome: Ouch! Why didn't I hurt you?

Violet: I guess the pod also contains a serum that eradicated the super power serum.

Dash: Which means you don't have powers anymore!

(Syndrome gulps when he saw the smug looks on Mr. Incredible and Elastigirl's faces)

Syndrome: Oh no.

(Elastigirl punches Syndrome in the face, knocking him out)

Elastigirl: Take that you jerk!

Dash: We beat Syndrome!

Mr. Incredible: That's right kiddo.

Elastigirl: It took all of us to defeat Syndrome and with some help from a certain kid who can transform into giant monsters. We own you Max, thank you.

(Solaris roars in agreement as he transforms back into Max)

Max: You're welcome, we did another team up, although the part of me getting drained of energy and seeing the clone of the guy who sent robots to kill several superheroes was unexpected.

Violet: Can we go home?

(Moments later, Syndrome is tied up and thrown into the Incredimobile's trunk)

Mr. Incredible: Let's take Syndrome to jail and it's hot dogs for dinner.

Dash and Violet: Yeah!

(The next scene shows that it's revealed that Xerek's lair took place on an oil rig)

Violet: So Xerek had his lair on an oil rig, I was expecting an island lair or a submarine.

Dash: How are we getting back into the city?

(Max smirks)

Max: I got an idea.

(Moments later, Max transformed as Geo-Mite carrying the Incredimobile, flying straight to Metroville in super flight speed)

(In the Incredimobile, the Parrs are screaming, except Jack-Jack, who's laughing)

Dash: Why didn't we use the hydro feature?!

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