part-69

Continuing from previous part 〽️

Abhinav and kirti

Abhinav got ready and sat on sofa waiting for kirti he was a little nervous he opened his phone trying to not get bore while waiting for her after sometime he heard the sound of anklet he quickly looked up only to be memorized by her beauty he sat there looking at her observing her each thing her shining face, cheeks covered with light red blush, eyes shining brightly and her big leashes going up and down multiple times due to her nervousness looking at him ,a small shy smile plastered on her glossy lips everything was mind-blowing about her he slowly walked towards her and wrapped his arms around her waist looking deep in her eyes

Abhinav - you look absolutely Alluring sweetheart.( He wispherd while staring deep in her eyes)

Kirti - Thanku you are looking wonderful too abhi ( said with a bright smile and hugged him breaking the eye contact)

Only he knew how his heart skips the beat listening to her

They both stood their being in eachother arms their hearts beating rapidly against eachother their was only love and comfortable Ness they can only hear eachother breathing sounds while leaving far away the sound of the world and got lost in eachother for the moment.

Kirti - let's go everyone must be waiting for us ( said breaking the hug unwantedly and looked at him)

Abhinav - what if I say let's just stay here ( said while again hugging her tightly and kissing her forehead)

Kirti - please ( said while chuckling a little)

Abhinav - ok if my wife wants this then let's go ( said while breaking the hug with a deep sigh and kissed her forehead once again)

Kirti - let's go ( said holding his hand and going out)

Their outfits

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Rajeev and shivali

Rajeev entered the wardrobe and he stood their awestruck by the beauty of his wife who was looking at herself in the mirror all ready she looked in mirror at him standing there while looking at her she felt shy and looked away not maintaining a eye contact he slowly walked towards her and back hugged her keeping his face on her shoulder looking at her trough the mirror

Rajeev - you are the most beautiful girl I have ever seen wifey ( he wispherd while kissing her cheek lightly)

Shivali looked down due to shyness while playing with her fingers the soft glow on her face was making her look wonderful after sometime she finally looked up slowly and saw him through the mirror they both looked at eachother admiring eachother their hearts where beating peacefully being with eachother

Shivali - you  look stunning ( said with a small smile)

His already brightly smile turned more bright hearing this

Rajeev - I think we should go now otherwise If we stay for some more time then I wont be able to let anyone of us to go out of the room ( he said while breaking the hug holding her hand)

She just smiled shyly while looking away and they both went out .

Their outfits

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All of them went downstairs and everyone start complimenting the couples

Jassi and Jasmine just looked at everyone with fake smile

Suman - ok everyone stand in the line their ( said pointing to the front)

Everyone stand beside eachother and looked at dadi confused

Then one by one dadi take of the eveil eye with red chillies from all the couples and Shivam,vani , jassi and Jasmine and then applied ( kala tika to all of them)

Black khol dot . everyone smiles brightly and touched her feet expected vani, jassi and Jasmine.

Urmila - let's go it's time for evening puja ( said while walking towards the temple)

Some of the relative and close business partners family came and went away after the puja now Rajeev and Abhinav were sitting on sofa after the puja as girls went to kitchen

Rajeev - by the way Bhai really impressive you didn't let anyone find out that you are doing fast ( said while smiling mischievously looking at his brother)

Abhinav - don't you think that these words doesn't suits you as you are doing the same ( said while having the same mischievous smile)

Shivam - hey brothers by the way how does it feels to do fast ( said loudly while running towards them and sat besides them )

Rajeev - don't you have other work rather than doing these stupid things ( said while looking at him irritated)

Abhinav - yes stop being behind us and do something else ( said while looking coldly at him)

Shivam - what if I say I won't ( said while smirking at them)

Vani - leave them shivam Bhai they wants to keep this secret and don't even wants us to talk with them ( while keeping her hands on both of shivam's shoulders from behind)

Shivam - yes now who are we to them they only want their wives ( said while sadly looking at them)

Vani - yes let's go ( brother are no longer the brothers) Bhai Bhai na rahe ( said while sadly looking down)

Both brothers just looked at their drama skills and shook their heads disbeliefingly

Abhinav - bas bhi kro tumhara drama ( said while looking at them with a small smile and narrowed eyes )

Stop your drama now

Shivam - aab hum drama kr rahe h waahh chal vani hum chalte h or apne dard ko gane se dur krte h ( said while standing up sadly)

Now we are doing drama wow let's go vani and take out our pain by singing

Vani - yes

Shivam and Vani both sing while hugging eachother and sadly looking at their brothers -

Bhai Bhai na rahe ,

( brothers are no longer the brothers)

Bhai Bhai na rahe ,

( brothers are no longer the brothers

Zindagi humein tera,

( Life to us your)

Aitbaar na Raha ,

(Trust is gone)

Aitbaar na Raha ,

( Trust is gone)

Amaanatein humne pyar ki,

( The treasures of our love)

Sounpie thi humne jise,

( We entrusted them to whom)

Vo humare bhaiyon tum hi the,

( You were our brothers,it was you)

Vo humare bhaiyon tum hi the,

(Your were our brothers, it was you)

Tumheen to the,

(It was you)

I changed the lyrics a little

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This is the real song

Abhinav - ruko tum dono Zara ( said quickly getting up holding shivam and making him sit on sofa)

Wait you both.

Rajeev hold vani making her sit on sofa

And they both start tickling them while they both shout loudly

Vani - s__o_r_ry so_rr_y bh__aiii ( shout while laughing hardly holding her stomach)

Shivam- bh__a__iiiii pl___ea__se st___op

( Said while trying to get out of Abhinav hold )

Rajeev - nhi nhi bolo aab Bhai Bhai na rahe ( said while tickling more)

No no speak now brothers are no longer the brothers

Abhinav - ha bolo aab tumheen to the

( Said while smacking his head)

Yes speak it was you .

Vani - so ______rrryyyy

Shivam - pleaseeeeee

Abhinav and Rajeev backed off fixing their outfits while smiling at Shivam and Vani who sat down holding their stomach while taking deep breaths Abhinav smacked vani heads while Rajeev smacked shivam's head

Rajeev - dramebaaz ( said while sitting down)

Shivam - ruko aap dono bhabhi and partner ke pass jata hu ( said while standing away from them breathing heavily)

Wait you both let me call bhabhi and partner

Vani - nhi hum unhen ye btate hai ki unke pati fast kr rahe h ( said while running and standing with Shivam)

No we should tell them that their husband are doing fasts

Jassi and Jasmine were looking at all of this with burning eyes

Suddenly shivali and kirti came and looked at Shivam and Vani with confused look as their haris were messed up badly while clothes were meesed up too while they were taking deep breaths

Kirti - what happened to both of you ( said while holding Shivam arm looking at him)

Shivali - yes like you both were being chased by dog's ( said while looking at vani)

Shivam - yes something like that happened ( said while fixing himself and glaring at his brother)

Vani - and you know who were the dogs (. Said while glaring at her brothers)

Both brothers glares at them making them scared

Shivam - let's leave it and why don't we do something else ( said while changing the topic quickly)

Vani - yes let's click pictures as everyone is looking great and it's your first karwa chauth celebration ( said while taking her phone)

Kirti - ok but ( said while looking at them with a small smile)

Shivali - are you guys ok ( said while looking at them with concern)

Rajeev - yes they are don't worry ( said while getting up)

Abhinav - yes let's click some pictures ( said while going towards kirti)

Girls nodded and they all went outside to click some pictures

Shivali - come jassi and Jasmine let's take pictures ( said while taking them with her )

All of them clicked multiple pictures with eachother and family and came back inside and everyone were sitting in hall waiting for the moon

Vani - I have a idea why don't we do some dance as it's still alot of time for the moon to come ( said excitedly looking at everyone)

Shivam - yes and specially couple dance ( said while getting up)

Urmila - no beta we ladies are doing fast it will tiers us all ( said while shaking her head)

Neha - yes we haven't drank a drop of water and now you want us to dance and show engery shut up you both ( said while glaring at them)

Suman - yes and on top that their was puja so they  were busy doing preparation they are already tired alot ( said while looking at them)

Jagdeep - yes so you both stay silent or eat and sleep but don't drag them to entertain you both ( said while looking at them)

Shivam - it's was her idea she is stupid don't worry I will make her understand ( said while looking at vani)

Vani - shut up Bhai you were the one standing up first and saying specially couple dance ( said while glaring at him)

Rajeev pulled vani hugging her placing his hand on her mouth

Rajeev - shhh leave him you just take rest ( said patting her head)

Vani smiled and kept her head on his shoulder everyone smiles looking at them

Shivam - no one loves me huhh ( said sadly looking down)

Kirti- come here devar ji ( said while pating the place beside her)

He quickly went and sat beside her keeping his head on her shoulder

Everyone just smiled looking at them

Abhinav - lily you are ok na ( said while keeping his hand on her head)

Shivali - yes jij don't worry ( said while smiling at him)

After sometime everyone were still sitting and waiting for the moon vani and shivam were already sleeping peacefully on Rajeev and kirti 's shoulder

Elders went to their rooms jassi , Jasmine,Abhinav and kirti were sitting while kirti was using her phone

Rajeev got up and went outside to see the moon shivali too walked behind him

Abhinav pulled kirti keeping her head on his chest hugging her

Abhinav - I think you should eat something its ok you have complete the fast all day it's doesn't matter to break it by seeing moon or not ( said while creasing her head)

Kirti - shhh I won't break the fast before the moon Aries ( said while closing her eyes)

Abhinav - it will take much time today I guess so -

Kirti - shh let him it's his day and I will wait so shhh ( said while placing her finger on his lips )

Rajeev looked at the sky requesting the moon to come as he don't want anyone to stay hungry for more time including his wife shivali stand beside him looking at the sky

Shivali - he will take extra time today and tease everyone knowing they all are waiting for him ( said while chuckling a little)

Rajeev hugged her tightly

Rajeev - why did you came go and sit down or lay on the bed when the moon will Aries I will call you ( said while kissing her forehead)

Shivali just stand silently hugging him after a little more time the moon Aries

Rajeev - let's call everyone as finally it came ( said and both went inside calling everyone)

Everyone quickly came out taking their plate and stand vani and shivam to stand their with sleepy eyes looking at everything

Everyone start doing the puja of moon offering water and food while looking at the moon and then their husbands through the sieve and the the men's made the ladies drink the water breaking their fast and then ladies bent down touching their husbands feets

Abhinav - please don't do that ( said concerned while his hands were busy holding plate and the water glass )

Kirti touched his feet and smiled towards him

Rajeev just suddenly looked at her while she already touched his feets

Both boys hugged their wives

Elders smiled at them

Vani - aab bhaiyon ka bhi fast break krwa do aap log ( said while hugging jagdeeps arm keep her head on his shoulder)

Now you guys break brothers fast too

Everyone looked at boys shocked including girls they were busy all day that they didn't notice that their husbands haven't ate something boys just had a small smile and exchange their positions with girls

Suman was about to say something but stopped seeing her son's and daughter in laws requesting eyes

Then boys did the rituals like girls and girls made them drink the water still in shock both boys bent down touching their wives feets

Kirti just hugged him with a small smile and moisture eyes

Kirti - thanku

Abhinav - thanku to you too sweetheart ( said with a smile)

Shivali - Don't ( said while back off)

Rajeev - shh I didn't stop you so you can't stop me too ( said and touched her feet)

Jassi and Jasmine too broke there fast looking at boys with burning eyes

Shivam - gifts ( said while leaning on walls with half closed eyes)

Kirti picked up the box which was placed on the plate and gave him he opened the box with smile their was a beautiful men's diamond chain it was simple yet elegant he smiled and gave it to her so she could make him wear it and softly she made him wear it and smiled

Abhinav - thanku

Everyone smiles

Shivali went inside and came back with a small box and gave it to him he opened it and found a purse which had a design alphabets written RS made with small diamonds

Rajeev - it's beautiful thanku ( said while creasing the Rs designs and hugged her)

Vani - now it's your turn Bhai do it fast ( said while rubbing her)

shivam - yes look how beautiful gifts our bhabhi's  gave you guys

Rajeev - maa we have to go somewhere so by we will come tomorrow ( said while holding her hand and taking her with him )

Urmila - okay ( said a little bit confused)

Everyone saw them walking away while shivali asked him confused

Shivali - were are we going that to at this time ( said while walking with him )

Rajeev - shhh it's surprise ( said and made her sit in the car ).

Back to the family

Abhinav - maa we will have our dinner in our room itself I am tired actually so bye ( said and walked out with kirti)

Shivam - both of them have plans wow I want to get married yrr ( said while walking towards his room)

Everyone laughed listings to him.

Abhinav and kirti

Abhinav covered kirti's eyes by his hand while opening the door

Kirti - what are you doing ( said while holding his hand)

Abhinav - you will know just one second ( said and closed the door behind and removed his hand)

Kirti stood their shocked and happy seeing the whole room decorated with lights and flowers she smiled happily while looking at the room Abhinav smiled seeing her reaction kirti looked at him with tearful eyes and hugged Him

Kirti - thanku so much ( said softly)

Abhinav - I am happy that you liked it come there is something else too ( said and took her towards the balcony)

and their there was table decorated shining brightly and food was already arranged their

Abhinav turned her around and hold her

Kirti - when did you did all this ( said feeling overwhelmed by his gesture)

She looked at everything with happiness everything was looking beautiful

Abhinav - now I am getting jealous of the room he is taking all of your all attension ( said while smiling)

Kirti - Offcourse but it is having the attension because it's is planned by my dear husband ( said while looking deep in his eyes )

Abhinav - ok let's have dinner ( said and they both had their dinner while feeding eachother)

Abhinav - I want to say something wait here

And he came back with a small bouquet of roses and made her sit on the chair and kneels down on his knee

Kirti looked at him eagerly waiting for him to speak it was already to much for and now him kneeling down her tears of happiness rolled down

Abhinav - I know I have created multiple mistakes in past and treated you like a stranger and trust me I regret everything I know because of my stupidness we have waisted alot of time already after that It took time for me to understand my feelings But now I don't want to waist a minute or a second so mrs kirti Abhinav rajput I want you to be with me for the rest of my life I want to love you to no end, I want to be your husband properly I want us to have a lovely future I love you from the bottom of my heart so will you give me the honour to do all this ( he said this while looking in her eyes both of their tears were rolling down his words and eyes were filled with love )

He was waiting for her to say something meanwhile kirti was shocked and so happy finally he confessed she was on cloud nine after listening to him he loved her finally gulping down a lump of saliva she breathed out and hugged him tightly

Kirti - Dare you to do all those things again then I will never forgive you and I love you too ( said while whispering her voice was delicate and filled with love)

Abhinav - I promise I will never

Abhinav closed his eyes tears were rolling down he stood up hugging her tightly and kissed her forehead Abhinav broke the hug and cupped her face wiping her tears

Abhinav - thanku so much

he smashed his lips on her kissing her passionately kirti too response with same passion and love the world around them was forgotten long back they both were just into each other suddenly the atmosphere heat up Abhinav's hands moved down gripping her waist tightly kirti wrapped her arms around his neck Abhinav lifted her up while walking inside finally the kiss broke due to lack of oxygen both of them were breathing heavily their breathing sounds was loud it was a sweet music for them. Abhinav made her lay on the bed and again kissed her his hands were roaming around all over her body he trail down his kisses from her lips to her cheeks, jaw and neck he stopped and looked at her she too opened her eyes feeling his intense gaze

Abhinav - do you want me to continue just tell me what you want without thinking about anything else ( he said while staring at her)

Kirti - yes ( she slowly whisper with a small shy smile)

Abhinav opened the drawer and took out a box he sat down and opened the box kirti looked at him confused he gently placed her feets in his laps and made her wear a beautiful diamond anklets her eyes sparks looking at them she got up and looked at him Abhinav hugged her and kissed her forehead

Abhinav - hope you like the gift

Kirti - thanku I love it

Abhinav smiled and kissed her forehead once again and the rest of the night went with full of passion and love the two souls finally become one the night was so much memorable for them. a new journey of their life begins. They both have become each other's life's the love which was left out at the start of their journey has now finally filled in their life. Kirti is his light in the drakness. his love who will be with him when he needs someone to whom he can tell anything with whom he is planning a beautiful future and for her he is the missing peice of her heart which is now found and she is now completed she has everything and his love is her strength which will be with her  and make her more strong , more confident and more Happy.

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Rajeev and shivali

Rajeev was driving while she was glaring at him

Shivali - why are not telling me anything first off all I am hungry and want to have dinner with everyone and second I can't wait to reach their so please tell me already what are you up to ( said while glaring at him with a pout )

Rajeev - oohh my goodness my angry bird is looking more beautiful and cute in anger and please wait na it's a surprise ( said while chuckling and focusing on driving)

His car stopped after a long drive while she was so much tired and sleepy

Rajeev- let's go ( he said while opening her side door)

She got down and saw a beautiful penthouse in forest type place there were beautiful plants and trees everywhere and the penthouse was shining with beautiful lights he hold her hands and walked inside the whole penthouse was decorated beautifully she roam her eyes all over the penthouse happily and loved the way the house was shining bright like the moon in night and then he made her sat on a chair infront of the table the food was already present their

Shivali - it's really amazing when did you plan all this ( said while looking at him excitedly)

Rajeev -  just thought of having a beautiful dinner date as a gift as we don't went to much dates ( said while smiling at her and serving food )

Shivali - thanku I really loved this gift ( said while hugging him tightly)

Rajeev - my pleasure let's have our dinner as I have already made you wait for so long ( said and feed her a bite )

Shivali - it was worth waiting ( and she feed him too )

And they both had their dinner

Rajeev - come ( he said while holding her hand)

Shivali - now where

He took her to the balcony and she was stunned by the beautiful sea and mountains at both of the sides and before she could say something he back hugged her tightly

Rajeev - shh I want to say something and finally after so many attempts I have gained confidence to say it I can't say this while looking in your eyes and I am very bad at expressing my feelings in words so please adjust a little bit ( he wispherd slowly while looking at ahead at the beautiful view)

Shivali was stunned listings to him she was already stunned by his gift and now him expressing his felling had made her more stunned she was breathing very slowly and let him continue

Rajeev - There are so much things which I did wrong in past I accept it and you can give me any punishment you want for that .l have never imagined that I will fall in love but you made me fall for you and made me realise how beautiful it is I love you mrs Rajput I really do ( he said all this and finally took a deep breath)

Shivali quickly trun and slapped him multiple times on his chest but he didn't moved a little bit He was smiling with tearful eyes and then she hugged him tightly

Shivali - I hate myself for falling in love with this heartless mr mafia I love you ( she said while sobbing)

His tears rolled down while he smiled happily creasing her back he broke the hug and wipes out her tears and kissed her fluffy cheek he looked at her for the permission to kiss while leaning down she closed her eyes giving him the permission he kissed her softly the kiss was smooth and filled with love after the kiss he placed his forehead on her

Rajeev - we have already taken things so slow but I don't want to anymore but the decision is still yours ( he said while looking at her)

Shivali - I agreed to what my husband wants ( she wispherd slowly he voice was barely audible but he heard her )

He smiled and kissed her and picked her up while going towards the room and the rest of night went away with Passion and love the wait was over they finally become one . Their was next level GLow on their face like the shining moon .he got her who made him know what love is and she got him to whom she can rely upon anytime .

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