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Here is the revised version with corrected grammar:

---------------------------PAYU------------------------

Payu left and immediately ran to his car. He started driving, unsure of where to go. All he could think about now was that Rain hated him because he was a ruthless person

"Damn it! Why do I always end up doing terrible things! I'm a damn killer! And now, I even planned to harm Rain! Rain doesn't deserve someone like me," Payu muttered to himself in self-reproach

-------------------------RAIN--------------------------

Meanwhile, Rain stood there frozen, unsure of what to do next

Should he apologize or

just let Payu go?

"I feel like I'm going crazy," Rain whispered to himself, feeling unease. The sound of thunder made him worry about Payu's well-being.

He picked up his phone and tried to contact Payu.

"The number you have dialed is unattended"

"The number you have dialed is unattended."

Rain continued calling Payu until he finally answered.

"P'Payu, are you home?" Rain asked anxiously.

"Yes, I'm home," Payu replied, but the noisy background made it hard to believe he was actually at home; it sounded more like a busy bar.

"P'Payu, don't lie to me. Where are you? I'm worried; the thunder is so terrifying, and it's about to rain heavily," Rain said with concern.

Payu remained silent for two minutes before unexpectedly blurting out, "I miss you," leaving Rain confused.

"Okay, P'Payu, where are you now? I'll come pick you up because your voice sounds like you're drunk," Rain said.

Payu simply hummed and said, "I'm at ********. I'll wait for you outside the bar." Rain hung up the phone and rushed to grab his belongings and umbrella.

He took a taxi and arrived at the club within minutes, where he saw Payu lying on a bench, with a random person trying to wake him up.

"You're so hot," the random person said, and Rain, though far away, heard it, feeling enraged for some reason. He ran to Payu and said, "P'Payu, let's go now," attempting to carry Payu.

"Hey! I was here first! Bitch! You should know your place!" the random person said, but Rain paid no attention and continued to pick up Payu.

The random person yanked Rain's hair, snatching Payu away from him.

"What the heck is wrong with you!" Payu shouted, despite feeling dizzy.

The random person let go of Rain's hair, appearing scared, and ran back inside the club.

"P'Payu, let's go, na~" Rain said in a soft voice, knowing that Payu was still upset.

"Rain, go home now. I'll ask my assistant to drive me. Please, go home," Payu insisted, but Rain disregarded his words.

"But I'm already here! Why are you pushing me away?" Rain said, sounding a bit angry.

"P-Please just go now," Payu said, but Rain stood his ground, waiting for Payu to come with him to his house.

"Rain! I told you to go home!" Payu shouted, but Rain paid no attention, watching as Payu approached him.

Payu grabbed Rain's hand, and suddenly, it started raining.

(What bad luck)

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