Chapter 21 – The Rite of Ankadiseth
Rapeworld Isekai
The three girls, Beatrice, Ginny, and Lothelea all felt it too. Wide eyed, they turned their heads this way and that, trying to find the source of this oppressive feeling.
I looked around the arena.
Chloe was still on her knees, but no longer servicing her partner. Pinky was curled up in a little ball, no longer being serviced, but lying in the fetal position, resting her head on Chloeâs lap. Chloe gently stroked her head trying to soothe the terrified monster girl. Foxy was still on top of Milah, still impaled on his member but was no longer grinding on him. She was hunched low, chest pressed against his face, covering his body with her own to protect him. Her hackles were raised, and she was growling defensively, looking around but failing to identify the threat.
âW-whatâs happening?â Ginny whimpered.
âYou know how we were joking about the gods smiting these bastards?â I asked.
âNo⦠no way,â Beatrice stammered.
âYes way,â I said, grinning evily. I was looking forward to seeing these bastards pay.
âBe humble, be deferent,â Lothelea hissed a warning. âDo not call their wrath upon us.â
A single voice called out. A young girlâs voice, one I recognized instantly. It wasnât loud, but it was strong, somehow perfectly audible to me despite the distance and walls between us.
âIa! Ia! NyarâShiggurath! Despair all ye sinners, and repent! For the Slithering Violation is called once again to taste the light of the mortal realm.â
It was Emiâs voice. What the fuck was this?
âIa! Ia! NyarâShiggurath! Despair all ye sinners, and repent! For the Despoiler of Purity has judged your worth and found it lacking.â
Emiâs voice grew more powerful, uncountable numbers of soft whispers joined in with her voice in a great hissing choir. Emiâs voice was fine, but the whispers my head when I tried to focus on them individually.
âOkay, so thatâs my friend Emi⦠another traveller from my world and sheâs⦠what is she doing?â I stammered.
âSheâs calling a god.â Lothelea gasped in horror. âThe rite of Ankadiseth, a dark elven ritual. The very same that doomed our world. Itâs happening again!â
âIa! Ia! NyarâShiggurath! Despair all ye sinners, and repent! Open the gate to the Cathedral of Eternal Violation. Let your voices sing! Sing for Him! Sing!â
Another wave of power crashed over me. I felt a great and unnatural compulsion to sing. I had to join the Choir. I had to show proper respect. I crushed the feeling with my Willpower, recognizing it as artificial.
âIa! Ia! NyarâShiggurath!â
Both Beatrice and Ginny sitting next to me had joined the Choir. Lothelea and Chloe were both able to resist the compulsion.
âIa! Ia! NyarâShiggurath!â
A great Choir sung out. A thousand voices or more. The entire town sung the Elder Oneâs praises. I felt another wave of power. Curious, I activated my [Sense Mana].
Infinite and Beautiful, Blinding and Overpowering. My eyes rolled back and I lost consciousness.
âIa! Ia! NyarâShiggurath!â
I woke up again, flat on my back, probably only a few seconds later. My mana sense was deactivated once more. I wasnât about to try something like that again.
[Sense Mana] Skill has reached rank 9
[Sense Mana] Skill has reached rank 10 (MAX)
Two skill levels in an instant, for merely attempting to sense a godâs power. Fuck.
âAre you okay?â Lothelea gasped.
âYeah⦠I just tried to [Sense Mana]. Bad idea, donât do that.â I explained.
âIa! Ia! NyarâShiggurath! Despair all ye sinners, and repent! The bargain is struck!â
There was a noise. It was an inhuman screech, as high as loud as shrieking steel, and as low and rumbling as a fog horn. It was an explosive wall of sound that would have knocked me off my feet, had I been standing.
Then⦠there was a terrible silence. Perfect and pure. Cold sweat dripped down my back, and I held my breath.
Then there was rumbling. And then⦠the world above me exploded.
A shapeless mass of black tentacles crashed through the walls and ceiling, slithering, grasping, ripping and tearing. A shower of wood splinters fell on me.
âIa! Ia! NyarâShiggurath!â The Choir sang.
âIa! Ia! NyarâShiggurath!â Lothelea, Chloe and I all joined them, unable to bear witness the divine being in front of us and not sing its praise.
The mass of writhing tentacles poured down on me from above. The tendrils enveloped me, smothering all light, slithering and tasting my flesh. My feet left the sandy floor and I was lost in the void, an entire universe composed of only slime and slithering.
The Great Violator touched me everywhere, arms, legs, breasts, back, toes, thighs⦠And yes, the Elder God of Defiled Purity raped me, as was his divine right. Tentacles forcefully entered my mouth, vagina, and anus, all at once. Despite the violence of His blessing, there was little pain.
I moaned against the tentacle in my mouth, and grinded my hips against the tentacles in my ass and pussy. They explored me deeply and roughly. I relaxed and let the creature bless me with its sacramental forced intercourse. There would be no fighting this one. I felt warm slime coat every inch of my body, inside and out. It tingled and relieved aches and pains I didnât even know I had.
Then, only a few seconds later, the tentacles withdrew.
I was no longer cowering in the corner of the pit with the other girls. I was now standing in the exact center. I had the memory of being covered in slime, yet I could find none on my body. I was perfectly clean and healthy. The soreness in my vagina from Crabbyâs earlier penetration was gone, as was the scratch on my thigh from Foxy.
I was healed and restored, perfectly refreshed. Despite not having eaten since the previous morning, or slept at all, I was neither hungry not tired.
Standing next to me, unharmed, healthy and whole was Chloe. The old slave collar around her neck was gone, replaced with a new one. This one was made of a black metal, almost like wrought iron, and gave off an ominous aura like that of the old god himself. It was beautifully ornate, carved with an exquisitely detailed pattern of slithering tentacles that seemed to shift and change whenever I wasnât looking directly at it.
Kneeling in a circle around us, facing me, kneeling with their heads to the floor, were twenty or so slaves. I recognized them as my fellow torture slaves from the dungeons down below. There were a few new faces, however. Dark elves, clad in maid outfits, probably the rest of Lord Anthonyâs unfortunate harem. They were all wearing new collars of black metal, decorated with the same tentacle motif as Chloe. I felt my own neck, and it was bare. I was no longer a slave, apparently.
âW-what the fuck happened?â I stammered.
I looked around. The monster corpses were reduced to a barely recognizable bloody pulp. Purple as well, had been decisively finished off by the tentacles, reduced to a mash of purple flesh and green glowing blood scattered and spread across the sand. I couldnât find any trace of Milah or Foxy near the spot where theyâd once been fucking. I looked around and spotted Milah in the crowd of slaves, kneeling with the others, no longer in any danger.
Despite being monsters, Foxy and Pinky were both spared the godâs wrath for some reason. They were far outside the circle of slaves, yet positioned the same as them, kneeling with their faces to the sand. They both had their old collars replaced with new tentacle styled ones. Foxy was soon kneeling up, back on her haunches, looking around warily, too scared to move from her position or rape any of the three male slaves present. Pinky, however, didnât dare straighten up or move from her submissive position at all.
As for the rest of the torture brothel⦠What torture brothel?
Everything above the rim of the arena pit was just⦠gone. The building was scoured clean, down to the foundation, like the aftermath of a passing tornado.
I heard the groaning of men from above us. Clearly there were some survivors. I had to admit, I was a little disappointed by that.
âHuh⦠okay then,â I muttered.
âW-what do we do?â one of the slaves muttered.
âThe masters are⦠gone?â another gasped in disbelief, looking at the open sky, now lit in pre-dawn twilight.
âA-are we⦠yours now, Mistress?â Lothelea asked me uncertainly.
I looked down at her, kneeling at my feet.
âHonestly, I have no idea, but I suppose the position we find ourselves in is probably⦠meaningful,â I told her.
âI think so too, Mistress,â Lothelea said. âPlease take care of me well.â
âSure, if I actually am your Mistress,â I chucked.
âWhy am I standing then? Iâm still a slave right?â Chloe asked.
âA head slave? Or perhaps merely a favored one? Perhaps the Despoiler of Purity wanted you to be above us in hierarchy?â Lothelea suggested.
âM-maybeâ¦â Chloe said, looking at me nervously.
âWell, if I were to gain ownership of everyone here, and actually set up a hierarchy, I would give Chloe a place of privilege. Iâve known her for a lot longer, and trust her,â I awkwardly explained.
âIf our position reflects your desires, then perhaps we really are yours,â Lothelea said.
âIs there any way to check?â I asked.
âHave a priest or artisan mage analyze the collars?â another elf I hadnât met yet suggested.
âI donât suppose anyone here can do that?â I asked, looking around the crowd. Nobody raised their hands.
So now what? New collars meant new enchantments. And if these were gifts from the tentacle god, odds were decent that the slaves wouldnât die if they tried to leave the brothel now. That wasnât a guarantee though. Similarly, I had no idea if I rightfully owned these slaves or not. Even if the god-crafted collars bound them to me, that still sort of made them stolen property, didnât it? I certainly hadnât bought any of them. Wouldnât I need to register them or whatever?
Also, where was I going to go? Somehow I doubted twenty or more slaves would fit inside that little bedroom in the rectory hall. And how much did slave gruel cost? I had twenty-something mouths to feed, didnât I? Oh, and clothes? Everyone but the dark elven maids were naked.
Eventually, my panicked indecision was cured by the sound of commotion upstairs, shouts and the sound of jingling chainmail armour.
âTry to remember who your neighbours are, and where youâre kneeling in this array, Iâll draw a chart later,â I ordered.
I heard two dozen murmurs of âYes Mistress.â Hehe⦠that was kind of awesome. I had more submissive slaves than I could easily count at a glance. Mistress Tylerâs found herself a slave harem. If they were all mine, Iâd have to avoid letting the power go to my head.
âOkay then, Iâll go poke my nose out upstairs and figure out whatâs going on. Then Iâll call for you all to follow if itâs safe.â I said.
More murmurs of âYes Mistress.â
I walked over to the door at the side of the arena, the one Iâd entered by. Before the tentacles, it had been a thick, monster resistant door, firmly barred shut. Now it was just missing, torn straight off its hinges. I crept up the narrow staircase to the ground level.
The upstairs was utterly demolished. Not a single shred of debris larger than my palm stood intact. The tiny shards of timber were spread around most of the town, poking out of roofs and littering yards. I could see the footprint of the brothel and its stone foundation. Most of the stone was still intact, but the underground torture chamber had been dug out, each individual brick crushed and scattered, leaving behind a deep empty pit of raw dirt. No other buildings had been damaged by the tentacles.
And then there were the bodies. Probably close to a hundred corpses, crushed and wrung out like dirty rags. Blood splattered every surface. There were maybe another twenty human survivors among the brothelâs clients. They no longer wore their red robes and masks. Each was completely naked yet miraculously unharmed. There was a pretty obvious message behind that. âDonât be a torture brothel customer anymore.â
I saw a row of town guards around the perimeter of the property, keeping curious townsfolk away from the scene of devastation, yet more and more curious people continued to join the crowds. After a few moments, I saw Lysander and Maddie in the crowd, waving at me. I waved back. I couldnât see Emi anywhere.
I also saw Father Jordan, three other priests and a half dozen acolytes who I hadnât met yet. They were combing the wreckage, checking on survivors, and distributing modesty blankets to cover the men. Father Jordan spotted me, and approached me carefully.
âLady Tyler⦠it⦠seems youâre unharmed,â he said awkwardly, handing me a modesty blanket.
I took it gratefully and covered myself. I was getting tired of always being naked.
âYep, Old Shiggy was a real gentleman. What a surprise, eh? He was nice enough to personally rescue me from the dungeon and even fixed up a few little injuries for me.â
Father Jordan paled when he heard me call the great and powerful NyarâShiggurath by such a casual title. I smirked. Based on the gods I met so far, I suspected few of them actually gave a shit about formality. For NyarâShiggurath in particular, from the brief moment of carnal communion I had with him, I got the impression that referring to him in a casual manner would actually be seen as endearing. The Violator of Purity was a lover, not a dominator.
âThis⦠shouldnât have happened,â Father Jordan said, apologetically.
Yeah no shit! I grumbled internally. I shouldnât have needed a god to save me, I shouldnât have been kidnapped, and this brothel shouldnât even exist in the first place.
I gave him a dirty glare, âYeah, makes me wonder how those guys managed to get Chloeâs old slave collar off, or put a fresh one on me without officially registering me. Any idea which priest Lord Volda bought?â
Father Jordan looked guilty, âWeâre⦠investigating.â
That sounded like bullshit to me, but I guess there was a chance that he might have been telling the truth about wanting to seriously investigate the brothelâs illegal slaves. Not wanting to piss him off, I decided to let the matter drop for now.
âDoes your church worship NyarâShiggurath too?â I asked, curiously.
âErm⦠no, the elder gods are best⦠left to their own devices, but none of the other gods seem at all displeased by his actions. That alone is quite significant. This was the first time one of the three Elders has manifested an Avatar in the mortal realm since NyarâLoaketer first Tainted the world. Yet this was not seen as an act of aggression, none of the pantheon are raising alarm about it. They⦠approve of this destruction. It seems the gods value you and your friends quite highly, even going so far as to allow the summoning of an Elderâs Avatar to progress uninterrupted.â
âAh, well I guess I should be flattered,â I said.
Father Jordan sighed, and held his head, âIâll be honest. This is a world-shaking event, and I have no idea what to do with you. Iâll be sending word to Baltour, to the main temple, for advice on how to progress from here. The Archbishop will surely want to speak with those who motivated the direct intervention of a deity.â
âTechnically, I motivated three⦠Vyreth brought me here in the first place then Trindon blessed me, changing my species to Aasimar, a sort of divinely blessed human,â I said.
âAh yes⦠I heard about that from your peers,â Father Jordan narrowed his eyes, and looked at my neck uncomfortably.
I sighed, âYes, I suppose Iâm technically a demihuman now, but there isnât a trace of Taint on or in my body. Iâm part angel⦠Iâm like, the opposite of Tainted. Also, remember a literal god just removed my collar, and made a very deliberate decision not to put a new one on me. With that in mind, I think maybe it might be wise to make an exception regarding enslaving me on sight?â
âIt is not for us to know the godsâ wills,â Father Jordan said cautiously. âPerhaps you were merely meant to wear a different collar. We can of course register you to your friends, as you did with Chloe.â
I led Father Jordan over to the edge of the pit, âLet me show you something.â
I gestured to⦠I quickly counted them⦠twenty four collared slaves, and two collared monsters. Every one of them was wearing a black collar, patterned with ornately carved tentacles, each collar an artifact of divine manufacture.
âThey all got shiny new collars, yet my neck is bare.â I explained.
Father Jordan swallowed nervously, âI see.â
âMaybe we should try to summon NyarâShiggurath again? Then you can ask him whether he just forgot about me. Heâs pretty old right? Maybe youâre suggesting heâs going senile?â I said innocently.
âN-no, that wonât be necessary.â Father Jordan stammered.
I grinned. That was a win for me. Iâd like to see him try to enslave me now, knowing that a literal god just disintegrated a building to free me from the last asshole that tried to do that.
âOh, speaking of collars, are you able to tell who theyâre registered to? Iâve got a feeling they might be mine,â I said.
âYes, I can do that,â he said.
âPerfect.â I waved at the slaves, âHey guys! Come on up. The scary people are⦠mostly squished. I have a feeling that the few survivors left behind were the less evil ones. We can analyze your collars and figure out what to do with you now. You probably donât want to stay here, right?â
There was murmured agreement, and a few seconds of nervous hesitation, before the slaves climbed to their feet and started shuffling through the narrow door and up the stairs. Interestingly, not only did the two monsters not molest anyone while my back was turned, but they remained behind, still kneeling obediently in their original positions. Pinky still hadnât even raised her head from the dirt.
âWe have records of mana signatures at the town hall,â Father Jordan explained. âIf these do not match you or the late Lord Volda, then it might take a while to find out who they now belong to.â
âLate Lord Volda?â I asked, grinning shamelessly.
âErr⦠yes. We found his⦠pieces spread all over his former mansion.â The priest explained uncomfortably.
âGlad to hear it.â I said, staring the priest in the eye.
âThis is⦠not a good thing,â He grumbled. âHe was⦠a rather prominent member of the community.â
âRemind me to tell you what, exactly, he did to one of his maids⦠Iâm sure by the end of my story, youâll agree that the bastard needed to be stopped. I seriously doubt he restricted himself to only torturing slaves. The man was sick.â
âI⦠wouldnât know,â Father Jordan said awkwardly.
I glared at the man bitterly. Was he complicit, or just incompetent? Was he in on it? Or was he just willfully blind to the evil in his society? Even the monsters werenât as fucked up as that so-called Untainted human. There was no way this priest didnât know what sort of shit happened in this brothel.
Whatever, I could chew this guy out later, once I was no longer naked beneath a blanket and relying on his help to identify my slave collars.
âBut yes, the collars, sure, Iâm mostly just curious to know whether theyâre mine or not anyway,â I said.
Father Jordan nodded, eager to be free of my glare, walked over and analyzed the first slave to make it up the stairs, Beatrice the wolfgirl. He closed his eyes and held his palm up to the collar.
âThe enchantment is so⦠alien⦠like nothing Iâve ever seen beforeâ¦â he muttered. âBut itâs⦠letting me read it⦠Letâs see. Shared ownership, you, Ash, Emi, Lysander, Maddie and Chloe. Equal authority. No primary or secondaries designated.â
âSlaves can own other slaves?â I asked.
âNo⦠not legally, but thatâs the way the collar is registered and⦠I canât exactly change it. The collar reacts to my church authority, letting me see what information it wants me to see, but it specifically blocks me from removing it or making changes.â
âRead only permissions?â
âUhm⦠yes I suppose thatâs a succinct way of describing it.â the priest replied.
One by one, the priest inspected every slave. Sure enough, every single one of them now belonged to me and my fellows from the tabletop gaming club. Or at least their collars seemed to think so.
Chloe was only slightly different. She had the same permissions as before. Unlike with the others, where all six of us were equals, for Chloe I was, once again, the primary owner, while the others were secondaries. Chloe gave me a relieved smile when she found out.
It took a good twenty minutes for Father Jordan to check everybody, but soon enough all the slaves were standing around in a big huddle, looking around at the carnage nervously, and watching the other priests and guards help the fallen humans who survived the mansionâs demolition. Unlike me, they werenât given any modesty blankets.
âWhat about the monsters?â I asked. The two monster girls were still kneeling inside the pit.
âThey have divine collars too?â he asked.
I just gestured towards them, the black metal collars were plainly visible, even from our view from the pitâs side above them.
âThe keeping of captive monsters is legal with special permission, if their masters can demonstrate they have a noble bearing and have the resources and proper facilities to keep them safely confined. In this case, the entirety of House Volda has that permission. If these monsters are yours⦠and you want to⦠keep them? This is⦠going to be bureaucratically complicated.â
âFeel free to direct all your complaints to the Slithering Violation personally, Iâm sure heâll offer you a sympathetic ear,â I snarked.
âYes, yes. The laws of man must bow to the laws of the heavensâ¦â Father Jordan grumbled. âLetâs just hope these collars have the standard embedded commands. Thatâs the bare minimum of safety for monster collars.â
Father Jordan started descending the stairs to the monster pit, I followed.
âEmbedded commands?â I asked.
âStop, sleep, follow, and go are the required ones, though many of the more expensive collars have more than just those commands,â he explained. âTo activate them, theyâre usually prefixed by the word âcommand.â For example, Command: Stop, Command: Follow, and so on. You can also release them from control with Command: Release, when you want them to return to their natural behaviour.â
âGotcha,â I said.
Father Jordan led the way out onto the sandy arena floor. Pinky still hadnât raised her head. Foxy focused intently on the priest, a cool and patient desire in her gaze. She still hadnât moved off her knees.
The priest sighed, âOf course one of them had to be a Manhunter too⦠I hate dealing with Manhunters,â he grumbled.
Father Jordan pointed at Foxy, âCommand: Sleep.â
I felt a little tingle in the back of my brain. A sort of confirmation. Did I want this pathetic unworthy excuse for a priest to command my god-given monster? That was⦠an interesting way to phrase it. Clearly, whatever shred of intelligence NyarâShiggurath embedded in the collar had some strong opinions about the current Church of the Untainted and their clergy.
I confirmed the prompt mentally. An instant later, the fox girlâs eyes closed, and she flopped over sideways like a puppet with her strings cut.
âThere was a small delay⦠but it seems it works,â Father Jordan said thoughtfully.
I smirked. I suspected the default monster collars didnât have the âask Tylerâs permission before letting the priest mess with your monstersâ feature as standard.
I pointed at Pinky âCommand: Release.â
Father Jordan gasped, and leaped away, âWhat are you doing!â he snapped angrily.
Pinky stayed on her knees, and raised her head just barely high enough to peek at me. She took a moment to decide what to do, blinking a few times, then sat back on her haunches, and shifted herself until she faced me directly. She stayed on her knees like a good girl, yet her eyes travelled all over my body hungrily. A little drop of drool dripped out of her mouth, and her massive eternally-hard erection bulged out obscenely now that sheâd changed her posture. It throbbed, and a little drop of precum wept out from its tip.
âSheâs not attackingâ¦â the priest said, confused.
âYeah, sheâs a good girl. Strangely docile, for a monster.â I explained.
I walked over to the kneeling demonblood elf and gently patted her on the head to show how tame she was. I was confident in her good behaviour, and showing off for someone important, so of course, like any good pet, she did something stupid to embarrass me. She suddenly lunged forward, tongue extended, trying to lick my crotch through a gap in the blanket. I took a step back, dodging back from the overly aggressive cunnilingus.
âNah uh!â I waggled my finger at her. âLater if youâre a good girl, but not right now.â
Pinky had no idea what I was saying. She had no concept of âlater.â She just looked hurt and betrayed. There was a pussy in her face, but then there wasnât, and now she was very sad the pussy went away. She stayed on her knees, but scooted forward a little bit. Slowly, bit by bit, she scooted closer to my crotch to maybe get in a sneaky little lick without alerting me to her dastardly scheme. It⦠wasnât terribly subtle.
âCommand: Stop,â I tried.
Pinky froze halfway through her movement, and then sat back down on her haunches. She gave me a pitiful wide-eyed puppy dog stare, complete with trembling lower lip, but she stopped trying to creep toward me. She still had her eyes completely fixated on my crotch however, biting her lip with desire. Clearly the command stopped her from doing things, but it didnât make her want to stop.
âFancy,â I said.
âIt seems the collars work.â Father Jordan commented.
âWell, they were made by a tentacle god, I assume theyâd be pretty high quality,â I shrugged.
Father Jordan stared at me, incredulous, âYou have no idea what you have, do you?â
âSome super good quality slave collars?â I replied, uncertainly.
âSetting aside the value of the slaves and captured monsters themselves, you have twenty-six personally attuned divine artefacts in your possession. Every single one of those is priceless. Youâve literally just doubled the number of known divine artifacts in the entire world.â
âOh wow, that might be a problem. Are people going to kill my slaves to steal their collars?â I asked.
âTheyâre attuned to you, and as divine artifacts that attunement canât be overridden by mortal means. Most attuned divine artifacts are⦠exceedingly lethal to prospective thieves, and most thieves know this. I doubt any would be foolish enough to risk it.â
âAh thatâs good,â I said. âSo uuh⦠what happens now?â
âNow? Those slaves are officially yours by divine mandate. As a rule, it is the Church, and not individuals who are liable to acts of divinity. So, congratulations I suppose⦠We register twenty four slaves and two monsters in your name, use church funds to compensate their previous owners, or their families if theyâre no longer alive, and wait for word from the Capital on what to do with this strange group of travellers so blatantly favored by the gods.â
âWhere do we put them? I slaves, I mean,â I asked. âIs there space in the rectory hall?â
âFor tonight, maybe. Iâll have one of the Acolytes ask around and find a modest manor house to lease for the month. Hopefully by the end of the month weâll have word from the Capital and perhaps time to arrange a caravan.â the priest explained.
âUhm⦠isnât renting a mansion like that a lot of gold?â I said nervously.
âReimbursement for twenty four slaves, market value between fifty and a hundred gold pieces each, plus registration fee of one gold twenty silver per slave... Compared to the price of the slaves the god stole on your behalf, the ten-gold monthly lease for a medium sized manor is just a drop in the bucket.â
I did some quick lazy math in my head, 75 gold times 24 slaves⦠how much were captured monsters worth? Letâs just call it 2000 gold pieces once everything was said and done. If one gold was $2000⦠I had just stolen something like four million dollars worth of slaves from this brothel.
I really didnât feel bad about that.
âYeah⦠that seems a little expensive,â I said nervously.
âA little expensive, she says,â Father Jordan grumbled.
âOkay⦠a lot expensiveâ¦â I admitted.
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Hey all. It's time to ask the internet hivemind for advice. I'm mostly making this story up as I go, and this specific story arc is almost over. Feel free to post a comment sharing your ideas for future story arcs, sexy scenes, and rape monster ideas. I have a tentative plan for the next story arc, but if one of you has a better idea than mine, I'll be sure to steal it. I probably won't use every idea you guys share, but odds are good that I could adapt a few of them for use in future chapters.