Chapter 8: The Commander

Character request by: JoelKellen

BJ: So let's see here. Those Argent demons keep on attempting to invade this hell. How are we gonna stop this?

Stan: I don't know gramps. We will have to kill the Khan Makyr if that were to happen. She's basically the whole reason this is happening.

Hayden: I was able to fix the portal opener so maybe we can get back to the Phobos UAC base with the BFG 10K.

Stan: Hold up. An even bigger gun? Oh I want to see this.

Hayden: Then we have no time to waste.

Stan: Okay. Come on guys.

Charlie, Vaggie, Alastor, angel, Husk And Niffty followed them through the portal making it to the control room in the Phobos base. They heard over the PA system the Slayer has entered the facility. All of the scientists, workers and guards got up and saluted.

UAC scientist: It's him. We need help now. The demons are attacking the BFG 10,000.

Stan told the others to wait there until he got back. He walks into the elevator past 2 guards and sees the BFG 10,000.

Stan: *Gasp* It's. So beautiful.

Music plays in the background.

He makes it to the bottom and is out on top of the base walking towards the BFG. He sees some one holding a couple of laser weapons shooting at the demons. He wore dark grey and black armor. His helmet was yellow with a pink visor and the word blaze on the front.

???: Hey you! mind helping out with these guys?

Stan: sure.

He pulled out Lucifer's Bane (the new super shotgun) and started blasting away. The stranger mowed down the imps while Stan grappled onto the cacodemons and ripped their eyeballs out.

This plays in the background.

???: Good shot dude. What's your name?

Stan: People call me the Doomslayer but my friends and family call me by my real name.

???: What would that be then?

Stan: Stan Blazkowicz. My great grandfather is William Joseph Blazkowicz the terror billy.

???: I recognize that name. Wait a moment you said Blazkowicz Correct?

Stan: Yes- shit a baron!

A baron of hell came running at them. It smashed into the wall next to them. BJ came running in wearing a UAC guard suit to breathe in space.

BJ: Don't worry Stanley I got em'!

He slid and took out his Schockhammer shotguns and blasted away. The baron fell over as BJ chuckled high fiving Stan.

Stan: Thanks for the help.

BJ: You're welcome. Who's this guy?

???: I'll tell you when we get back inside.

BJ: Sure thing.

They continue to blast the demons back to the hellhole they crawled out of. It was super fun and the three armored men were doused with blood and guts. They wiped the blood off of themselves. The three walk back to the elevator and get taken back up to the control room. Charlie came running and hugged Stan as he patted her on the head.

???: Now who's this girl?

Stan: That's Charlie. She's a demon but not like the ones out there.

???: Oh well I didn't get to introduce myself.

He pulled of his yellow helmet revealing his face. It looked just like BJ's and Stan's. He had brown hair and a scar on his right cheek.

Keen: The name is Keen. Commander Keen. (this is him when he's older so they all look similar but there's no official way he looks)

BJ: Hold on. My other grandson went by that name. Could it be?

Stan: Father? Is that you?

Keen: I guess I am.

They all did a group hug and Charlie joined in. Keen never got to see his son or grandfather or many years. BJ was dead and sent to heaven then kicked to hell. Stan was a cold blooded demon hunter who was in the hell his great grandfather was sent to.

Keen: So what did I miss? I was frozen in time for a while. That's why I still look like I'm in my mid 30's.

Stan: Well...there's people being sent to hell from heaven and we are trying to stop it. Along with the demon invasion on earth.

Keen: Well how'd they get here then?

He points at the gang sitting by the doorway.

Stan: They are my demon friends. They've helped me stop Argent demon invasions in their hell.

Alastor got up and went to shake Keen's hand.

Alastor: Nice to meet you Mr. Blazkowicz. I've said that three times now.

Keen: Nice to meet you......what's your name?

Alastor: The name is alastor.

Keen: Well Its Nice to meet you alastor. So who are the rest of you?

Charlie: This is my best friend Vaggie, That is angel Dust, There's Husk, And this small thing is Niffty. We have others at the hotel.

Keen: Hotel?

Stan: I help out with her hotel in hell. *quietly* Mainly because we are dating.

Keen: What was that?

Stan: Oh uhm...we are dating...and she's the princess of hell.

Keen: So my son...a demon murdering war machine...is dating a princess? And not just any princess...the one of hell?

Stan: *nervously* Yes.

Keen: I'm so proud. My son will become a king and the king of hell for that matter.

Charlie was blushing hearing Keen talk about her and Stan getting married. She loved him a lot and thought wouldn't it be nice if they did. Then wouldn't it be nice by The Beach Boys plays in her head.

Keen: It's been good to catch up with family. So let's go see about this hotel you've been talking about.

Hayden: Sure. Let me input the coordinates and then blammo.

A blue portal opened up. The Blazkos went first to make sure they were in the right place. Keen was just as surprised as BJ when he first got there. It looked nothing like how he expected it to be. Stan showed him around the place just like he did with BJ.

Keen: This looks a lot like New York. It's got the vibe of it.

Stan: That's what Hayden said. It might be hell, but it's better than what's going on up on earth.

Keen: I agree with you on that. So are you gonna become the next ruler of hell?

Stan: You mean...

Keen: Yeah. I've seen how you and Charlie get along. Oh it just reminds me of how you were with rose back when you were in high school.

Stan: Yeah. That's the whole reason why I started dating her. She reminded me so much of her and I even did the song with her too.

(A/N: Don't get mad at me for saying Keen is the father of the doomslayer. Remember, It's called a fanfic for a reason)

Keen: You mean the...

Both: Ain't Nothing but a heartache. Ain't nothing but a mistake. I never wanna hear you say, I want it that way.~

Stan: How do you remember something like that? That was like so many years ago.

Keen: A Father always does. Now let's head back to that hotel you and your girlfriend run.

Keen patted Stan's back as they walked towards the hazbin Hotel. The three main Blazkos were here and ready to kick some demon ass. The commander, Terror Billy, And Doomslayer are an unstoppable force.