Self Aware

Hi guys.

Just finished reading my work and boy, I cringed so many times it was ridiculous. Chapters were SO short in the beginning, how embarrassing lol

I've written some notes down as I was reading the story again.

I'm not sure how to continue, more like fix, the story. It's going in so many directions that don't make sense.

And Elijah? He makes no sense. He has no motives and it's kind of annoying, honestly.

How could I write someone so bland and with almost no purpose??

I think I'll mess around with another chapter and see what kind of feedback I get and go from there.

Thanks for those who stuck around.

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