Before Starting
The Servant Mate (complete)
I feel the need to say this due to all the comments on the prologue, but I'm not discouraging comments. I love them, and I'll gladly take any criticism for this book. However, I do understand how choppy and hard to read the first chapter is. I also understand that it really doesn't make that much sense.
I wrote this book almost entirely in 6th and 7th grade. It isn't that surprising that my writing sounds like it sometimes. I need to edit this book so much, I just don't have the time or inspiration. One day, I might even republish this with a slightly different plot to smooth everything over. But today is not that day. Tomorrow isn't that day either.
In simple words:
Prologue = Choppy
Rest of book = Less choppy (Edit many years later: THIS IS A LIE THE ENTIRE BOOK IS A MESS but I'm leaving it up because if even one person still enjoys it then I'm happy. Just... maybe keep in mind that I was 11 or 12 when writing this LOL)
Ok, I'm done.
(Virtual cookies to anyone who actually read this!)