You may have noticed...
Dark Forest (Watty's 2017)
that I still haven't taken this down despite saying I was going to xD I'm still working on my ginormous rewrite and am not even close to thinking about submitting to agents/publishers yet. For those that have read it, here are some changes I'm making or considering making. Let me know what you think!
1. Changing from 3rd person to 1st person-- this was actually my firsts attempt at third person believe it or not!
2. Silas moving from a minor character to one of the leads. So becoming the third member of Zara and Ronan's little team. He really only appears twice and everyone seems to love him so why not? He would probably not have his initial friendship with Zara, maybe become someone she and Ronan capture and are willing to exchange his freedom if he can guide them where they need to go. Eventually, warming up to him.
3. No more princess/Ronan's sister. Instead, they're looking for Gray who was not killed but taken. Ronan is still keeping secrets however because in this version, he would be a Hunter using  Zara to get to Ardon for revenge.
Amongst other things.
Open to ideas/suggestions/comments
Thanks all! :)